Wednesday, November 2, 2016

blog 27



This photo was taken for the elementary yearbook. How can it be made better?
before the photo was taken? after the photo was taken?

29 comments:

  1. get the extra kids out of the way or crop them out Daniel James

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  2. you could crop it so just those kids on the monkey bars on
    -dom

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  3. it could be made better before the photo was taken by zooming in on the kids a little more and after by brightening the picture trinity

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  4. it can be not as blurry - Stephanie Kler

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  5. little better lighting, and make it portrait
    Aidan

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  6. i could be made better by cropping the blurry part out, and having both kids swinging . finn duff

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  7. you could have made them not inn the middle before, and after you could have cropped out the other peeple
    Kat

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  8. it could have been better if the students were more natural and didnt look at the camera and the zoomed in a bit more so then there isnt as much background -gavin

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  9. you had the change to zoom and crop out people lauren

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  10. it could be better before by getting the extra kids out of the picture. after the it could be better if you crop the photo to just the two kids.
    Gemma

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  11. the child running could be less blurry and it could also be more focused on the two kids hanging from the bars
    -holli

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  12. Afterwards, they could have brightened the photo. Before, they could have zoomed in. - Hailey T

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  13. If you filled the frame with the people on the bar. After if you cropped out the other kids around the bar and only had the kids swinging-Sean

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  14. before it could have being more focused on the children playing. after it could have being more clear and maybe more zoomed in.

    Kristina dupont

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  15. Before they could be standing and after it be less blurry

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  16. Its could have been zoomed in and waited for the child in the background running to stop running. -Amelia Patton

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  17. before: focus the camera more. after: crop it, so the monkey bar thing is the only thing on the photo. -George Haj

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  18. it could be better by it can be filled and crop out other kids

    dawson

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  19. before it could be more focused on the children. but after it can be less blurry and more focused and clear. Ran sandstede

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  20. maybe make the lighting a little bit better and crop the extra kids around the edges of the photo

    Dylan Rees

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  21. crop out the others. Landon McArdle

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  22. before you could have made all the kids stay still and after you could have cropped the photo and brightened up their faces -maicen

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  23. You could have taken the picture portrait, and they could have taken the picture a little before so the kid in the back round would not be in it

    -Hailey Knott

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  24. focus the camera then crop the picture down to the monkey bars are the subject jordan olsen

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  25. Focus the camera and crop the blured kid and then your done.



    james

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  26. the blurry kid in the back, before try again after crop

    nick j

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  27. It can be made better before by making sure there arent any blurry children but better after by cropping the kid out

    Sophie

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