Sunday, September 11, 2016

blog 4

Photo by Dar Yasin

How could you make this photo better?

32 comments:

  1. maybe if you changed it to a front angle, but other than that, I like it. Landon McArdle

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  2. If some of the dust was cleared and there were more colors it would look better. Also there is a little shadow of a person in the back, if that was more clear it would look better.
    Amelia patton

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  3. I could make this photo better by increasing the lighting and also the contrast.
    James Haggerty

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    1. And if you changed the dust colorful it would look better.

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  4. maybe less dirt in the air

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  5. I think it needs more light. -George Haj

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  6. I think I could make this photo better by having les dust

    Kristina dupont

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  7. Mabey if you added more light and color-sean

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  8. change the lighting.

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  9. Increase the contrast and make the background a little bit easier to see. Dylan Rees

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  10. I could make this photo better by decreasing the fog/dust.

    Sophie Dorey

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  11. you can change the angle of the camera and you could have zoomed in some and also made the picture vertical instead of horizontal - maicen

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  12. maybe less dust and you changed the brightness

    Bradley Farr

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  13. I think what would make this photo better would be, if you change the lighting, and try to get less of the dust/fog.

    -HAILEY KNOTT

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  14. I think you could make this a better picture by taking away some of my dust and changing the brightness of the picture. Trinity

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  15. I would go with a little less fog and change the lighting


    -Olivia

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  16. not as much dust- Stephanie Kler

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  17. Less dust, better lighting, and different angle - Hailey T

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  18. if there was less fog/dust and change the lighting. Gemma Crollard

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  19. I think it would be better if there was less dust in the photo. Dan James

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  20. have there be more light

    Aidan

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  21. not so much dust. finn duff

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  22. to make this picture better u could maybe add some less lighting lauren

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  23. I think it would look better if you were to brighten and its bit hard to see through the fog

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  24. I should have very little dust because the dust cover basacly the hole photo
    Dom Dearmond

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  25. I might want to take away some of the smoke, so you can see how grueling the work is.

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  26. the ball is in the picture, if the ball wasn't in the picture, it would look awkward. also it is focused on the ball and people and the background is blurred out

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